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Broken Glass

Lawson.

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Tried out a tutorial on Youtube and I think I did pretty good.

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Guardian

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Looks good. I think if it was sharper it would look even better. Maybe its a tad too dark? I prefer darker colors, but with glass you can be too dark.

Nice work though. Keep up the progress, and keep sharing your work!
 

Lawson.

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Guardian said:
Looks good. I think if it was sharper it would look even better. Maybe its a tad too dark? I prefer darker colors, but with glass you can be too dark.

Nice work though. Keep up the progress, and keep sharing your work!

Thanks for the feedback :D
 

Toxique

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Agreed with Guardian, I feel if you would've lighten the text a little more (specifically the LAW) it would look a tad better. Overall though it looks pretty good :)
 

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Toxique said:
Agreed with Guardian, I feel if you would've lighten the text a little more (specifically the LAW) it would look a tad better. Overall though it looks pretty good :)

Ahhh okay. I see what you mean now. Thanks!
 

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I LOVE that. I'm curious, did you use font for this or did you manually design "Lawson" in this graphic design? If so, what program did you use? I am really diggin' that broken glass design. It almost seems too dark but I think any lighter might take away from the feel of the image. Great work!
 

Hugop

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We can notice the broken glass on the center but not on the sides. Maybe it looks better if you do it on both sides too?
 

Lawson.

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Sharon said:
I LOVE that. I'm curious, did you use font for this or did you manually design "Lawson" in this graphic design? If so, what program did you use? I am really diggin' that broken glass design. It almost seems too dark but I think any lighter might take away from the feel of the image. Great work!

Thanks for the feedback! And yes everything was created by me except for the glass image. I use "Photoshop CS6".

 

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It looks awesome for a beginner keep up the good work I know this post is nearly 3 year old post but still its awesome would love to see more of your graphic work
 
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